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文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；作者句法知识较为扎实，可增加复合句和从句使用；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，更能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇。
From the picture shown on the paper,we can see that a boy expressed his worry about nuclear waste to his father.To his surprise,his father didn't support him but asked him to empty the dustbin. I am agreeful to what the father did and what the father said.Actually,it is important for us to do small things rather than undertake somethings big without any process of preparement.With the society changing so quickly,many people can't wait to do something great.So,most of them are anxious and impatient.Nevertheless,only we do small things,can we undertake big things as we can accumulate experience and learn something useful.In the meantime,it is a way to cultivate essential personalities,like patience,persistence and so on for accomplishing our dream well. Therefore,in the views of what I mentioned above,I would like to share my own perspectives,which is about what we should begin before undertaking great things.It is vital for us to do small things and we should pay attention to small things,don't look upon them.
