2013考研英语二图表作文预测:中国小城镇的用电量

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The form describes gradually increase of electricity consumption in a small city in china from 2004 to 2007 Especially in 2007 the increasing rate arrive at 12.88 percent With the rapid development of economy the average consumption has kept steady growing Besides the high technology makes people's life more colorful and convenient because of the appearance of electronics products Such as washing machine phone computer and so on Everyday everybody use their phones or computers to get closer to each other Only this part must be a important proportion of it At the same time there are many advanced metropolises where lighting must be kept for some reasons for example the street lighting the lighting for visitors to enjoy We say that this kind of big city has no dark hours only if there is no electricity Nowadays we can't live without electricity in our daily life It's vital for us to keep everything in order In the other words we should know that the power may be used up one day So form now on we ought to learn to save electricity and to use it reasonable