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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71616
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

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From the picture shown on the paper,we can see that a boy expressed his worry about nuclear waste to his father.To his surprise,his father didn't support him but asked him to empty the dustbin. I am agreeable to what the father did and what the father said.Actually,it is important for us to do small things rather than undertake somethings big without any process of preparation.With the society changing so quickly,many people can't wait to do something great.So,most of them are anxious and impatient.Nevertheless,only we do small things,can we undertake big things as we can accumulate experience and learn something useful.In the meantime,it is a way to cultivate essential personalities,like patience,persistence and so on for accomplishing our dream well. Therefore,in the views of what I mentioned above,I would like to share my own perspectives,which is about what we should begin before undertaking great things.It is vital for us to do small things and we should pay attention to small things,don't look upon them.

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