作者词汇量偏少,不过单词拼写方面做的不错;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;句式偏短,建议加强复杂句的使用。
i like read books which science novol everyday.this is a good habit.it is good for ours spirit.when i read a book, I'll be immersed in the book world, grow up together with the hero.so,reading books can make me happy. Listening to music also my hobby.it can make me become activity.It's like a mentor, teach me what is optimistic, what is positive towards life. i like them.
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