2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will As the competition in society is becoming more and more intensive, there are more and more obstacles in your path to success. Therefore, the strong will plays an important role if you are eager for success. In retrospect, everyone who has received his or her own achievements all has a strong will in the history of human. I will take Edison as an example, who are a famous inventor. His every invention almost goes through a lot of failures. Lamps, in particular, are born with approxiately 100 times failures. It is his persistence that make us live in the bright world. The students, the same as the above, must have the merit of strong will if they really want to succeed. At school, they must study hard because only in this way can they enjoy a significant life.