2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Nanjing is one of the beautiful city in China.Nanjing is my favorite city.It is very big and beautiful. When my foreign friend going to China,I will take he go to nanjng.Nnjing's history is very old.Don't surprise to you see the old building when you walk the road.This is because nanjing have old building everywhere.Nanjing have many scenic spots can make people happy.First of all,I intend take he visit Nanjing Museum.I often go to there.There collect many China older thing which can shows my China's culture.After I will take he go to Xuanwuhu.If that time is spring,we can Cherry blossoms togeter.If the time is fully,I would take he go everywhere in nanjing. Nanjing is beautiful culture city.If you would travel you can choice nanjing.I think it not let you disappointment.