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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

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可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;简单句偏多,应增加从句使用;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,另外还需加强拼写检查。

用户练习作文:

It is unwise to judge a persin by their appearance.Because the things you see may not be true.In this complex world people like to hide their true thoughts. Firstly,it is important for us to see things in many ways.We shouldn't see things on one side.Secondly,a person's appearance was herited from their parents and was naturaly.Judge a person can not depend on appearance. The true beauty is from people's heart. So it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance.

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