2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

it's believed that computer can do almost every thing.when it was invented ,scientists carried away that they made a miracle.Computers were generaly used not only in mathmatics, physical,chemical and astronomy , but in places likes libery,financial and army to replace the work of man .For the reason , computer was entitled 'Electronic Brain' in terms of applications . Would computer control the human? The answer is negetive.Although computer is calculate faster and accuracy than people, the fact is undeniable; the computer is designed , made and programmed by man. Some science ficitions has made up facination stories about the computers or the robots conquers the human and the earth ,even the whole university.But this is unrealisity.The horse help man a lot ran faster than we ,but it is still a slave. In a word ,with the help of computers, the future of human is promissing. We would improve the products and conquer the university .we can do a lot things that we can't do before.