托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；可适当增加高级词汇的使用量。

There is a popular proverb among people that look before you leap. It instructs us that we should pay careful attention on what we do. Similarily, if we judge a thing without prudential consideration,we can't make it trustful. Therefore, from where I'm standing, I absolutely agree with the notion that snap judgements can never be trusted. Reviewing the history , most of the critical decisions are decided in a cautious way. For example, The Emancipation Proclamation is decided by thousands of people's struggles, as a result of which the white people finally proclaim its sucess. Just imagine, if the white people declare it immediately without any consideration. How can they be trusted? In the modern society, if two businessmen want to invest a thing, they are never to do it by their impulse, but they would go through all kinds of investigation and judgements , alone with these, they can decide what they want to do. All in all, people in today's society have to face a lot of difficilties and make plenty of judgements. But they can't easily trust those whose snap judements. Without a deliberate consideration, how can it be trustful.