小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I am Tom. i have a friends, and she is very beautiful. we all like hime. she lives near my house. we play toghthre often. do you like her .I am Tom. i have a friends, and she is very beautiful. we all like hime. she lives near my house. we play toghthre often. do you like her I am Tom. i have a friends, and she is very beautiful. we all like hime. she lives near my house. we play toghthre often. do you like her