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I had a dream of A;ice yesterday. She is a beautiful girl. She took me to the Wonderland. We had a good time there. It had all kinds of flowers. To my surprise, they could speak to me. And there were many tiny animals flying over and over again in the sky. I tried my best to make myself fly like them. But I failed. In a short time, Alice gave me a special coat which was made of silk. Then, I also could fly as high as them. How excited I was! All of a sudden, I fell off. And I shouted for help. Finally, I woke up in the end, and it was a dream.
