语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;注意文中个别的句子错误;作者能较灵活使用高级词汇,但词汇量仍需继续积累单词拼写要认真。
there are two parts, sometimes we had better choice books and sometimes we can just read books which are not selected by us . In my case , my major is about softwere techonogy so i need find some books which are relevant my major and throuhg reading there books i can acquire knowledge fast and what i want ,finally it make my professional knowledge was increased if we just learning what is about our major isn't enough so we should learn some books which isn't about major such as nature scinece history and some which is about your habbies