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As a senior, my college life is going to end. I am quite appreciate my college for teaching me a lot of things. Three things my college have taught me. How to make friends. How to open eyes and how to be friendly with people who do not like me. Making friends is our life issue. Before College I have never live with any roomate. And I was very afraid to live with 3 strange persons cause I have heard you might live with some werid roomates in college. But I and my roomates are all kind persons so we become friends at the end. The second thing my college have taught is join some great club can help us to open eys. In the club we can learn some new what can not learn from the book and we can make more friends. There is a said everyone has his own story. The last thing college bring me is how to be friendly with people who do not like me. Actually I am a girl can not be friendly with all of person before my college. But in the college I konw if someone not you firends he can not only your war. What my college brought me is all my life luxiouries.
