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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:35浏览次数:16954
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题目:Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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文章衔接手法恰当;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。

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In China,there is a old saying that "He who does not reach the Greeat Wall is not a true man.So I will take my foreign friend to visit the Great Wall. The Great Wall is one of the eight great miracles of the world.It locates in Bei Jing that is the capital of China.The Great Wall is built in Ming dynasty and defended the offense of enemy.It is also a model that represents intellengence of ancient chinese.Many visitors are from the around th world vist it,including many farmous persons,such as TH.when people stand at The Great Wall,they must be astonished by the magnificent prospect. I bet my foreign friend can not wait to come to visit the Great Wall.

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