2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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In China,there is a old saying that "He who does not reach the Greeat Wall is not a true man.So I will take my foreign friend to visit the Great Wall. The Great Wall is one of the eight great miracles of the world.It locates in Bei Jing that is the capital of China.The Great Wall is built in Ming dynasty and defended the offense of minority nation.It is also a model that represents intelligence of ancient Chinese.Many visitors who are from the around th world visit it,including many famous persons,such as CJ.When people stand at The Great Wall,they must be astonished by the magnificent prospect. I bet my foreign friend can not wait to come to visit the Great Wall.