小学二年级英语作文:My holiday

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I really had a wonderful time at Dragon Boat Festival. We have three days off, and my family went to Longhu Resort for vacation. There were nine of us in all, my sister-in-law and her husband, and her father-in –law, and her three children, and my sister-in-law, and my husband and me. My sister-in-law drove us to there. There were a great number of visitors. The Resort is really large and magnificent, it has playground, Photography Base, Sea of flowers, food street and so on. The scenery there is very beautiful, we took a lot of beautiful pictures, and tasted lots of delicious food. We had many fun there, and it would be better if the weather was not so hot. I enjoyed the Dragon Boat Festival very much, I am looking forward for such a holiday again!