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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10403
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;作者能词汇表达较准确熟练,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

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Just as there are not two same leaves in the world,everyone is unique.Someone good at math,some one good at english,while some one good at exercises.So,we should treat students person to person.It is not wise to put all eggs in one basket. what might happen if we ask liuxiang to do a science experiment?In my opion,we will not have neither a athletic nor a scientist. liuxiang run fast,so he took part in sports games.langlang good at playing piano ,so he make efforts in piano.luxun do well in writing,so he became a excellent writer.Every one takes his or her advantages,do not depress them.If we ask liuxiang,langlang and lunxun do a same thing,just as math,we will miss athletic,musician and author in one time. Last but not least,don not put all eggs in a basket,treat them differently.

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