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Just as there are not two same leaves in the world,everyone is unique.Someone good at math,some one good at english,while some one good at exercises.So,we should treat students person to person.It is not wise to put all eggs in one basket. what might happen if we ask liuxiang to do a science experiment?In my opion,we will not have neither a athletic nor a scientist. liuxiang run fast,so he took part in sports games.langlang good at playing piano ,so he make efforts in piano.luxun do well in writing,so he became a excellent writer.Every one takes his or her advantages,do not depress them.If we ask liuxiang,langlang and lunxun do a same thing,just as math,we will miss athletic,musician and author in one time. Last but not least,don not put all eggs in a basket,treat them differently.