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文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；全文结构较为严谨。
Just as there are no two identical leaves in the world,everyone is unique. Someone is good at math,some one is good at english,while some one is good at exercises. So,we should treat students from person to person. It is not wise to put all eggs in one basket. What might happen if we ask Liuxiang to do a science experiment? In my opinion,we will not have neither an athletic nor a scientist. Liuxiang run fast,so he took part in sports games. Langlang good at playing piano ,so he makes efforts in piano. Luxun do well in writing,so he became a excellent writer. Every one takes his or her advantages,do not depress them. If we ask Liuxiang,Langlang and Lunxun do the same thing,just as math,we will lost athletic,musician and author for one time. Last but not least,don not put all eggs in a basket,treat them differently.
