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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):幸福之路

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:08浏览次数:4836
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying "Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them." You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problems and be happy. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;请注意词汇的拼写,同时保持灵活多样的词汇表达。

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How to Be Happy There is a saying goes like this:Happiness is not the absence of problem, but the ability to deal with then. That's true, actually, it is the problems that enable us to have feelings of worry, relaxation, achievement etc. Some of those feelings may not be confortable, but some are really wonderful. And all those feelings togather makes us live a real life. Take Nick Vujicic for example, he has no arms and legs since he was born. "When I was eight, I was downhearted,"once he recalled, "I yelled at my mom, told her that I want to die." And he even tried to drown himself in the bathtub when he was ten, while fortunately he failed. But during those time, he had learned how to go through the atraitened circumstances in his life, and gradually made some friends. He saw an essay in the newspaper about a disabled person who was encourage. So, he decided to be encourageing too, so he can be of help to those who are despondent. He feels happy to do so. He said"Those were rough times for me, but it made me become independant." Exactly, it's impossible for us to aviod the problems we may someday encounter in our lives. But we can find a way to deal with it.All we have to do is to have a strong mind. When life tries to block all the wind out of you, ypu've got to roll with the punches.

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