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It's easy to find that there are some people that definitely believe what they see or what they are told, apperently, which is unreasonable. Sometimes we only know a little about the thing that we think it's true. Here are some facts that influence what we think. First, we couldn't make sure what others say is a fact, and sometimes they still can't promise what they say isn't false. More seriously, if someone lie to you, they don't tell the truth. Second, we judge an argument based on what we already know, which is called kowledge and experience, but we also need to judge carefully when we meet some phenomenons that may be true. Because our knowledge and experience are not critirion, are not principle that can measure the wolrd. Third, thinking twice before receiving some message from other persons can help us keep a good habit to make best use of our brain.In this way, we understand the world and the society more clearly. According to what have been discussed above, it's always be good to think carely before belieing what you hear or say, and to consider carefully before making a conclusion.
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