2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；可适当增加从句的使用；用词丰富，高级词汇的积累还有很大提升的空间。

Recently there is a hot topic about computer and brain after the match between Google robot and human being, which catches so many people's attention to computer. As a concequnce, some pople begin to consider whether the computer will conquer our brains. In my opinoins, no matter how much progress the computer technology has made, our brains are much more smart, computers always are tools that release the heavy load of our brain. Here are some reasons contributing to my opinions. First, the computer can't get the energy independently, which can keep the programs working. Without the electric energy, the machine is dead. Second, computer can update it's software, just like human being can study new knowledge. The computer can't update it's hardware by itself, however human being can grow up, can make his body much stronger. Beside, human being can cure himself if the body is hurt, but the computer can do nothing if the hardware is break. So, by compareing the most important parts of computer to human being, it's obvious that human being has much advantages that can help human being survive in the nature , and as a tool invented by human being, the computer can't live alone. And at last, I think i need to say, even in the match, Google robot won human being, we still must realize the winner was the Google company, not the robot, because, Google company controls the robot.