2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

可适当增加从句的使用；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；用词丰富，高级词汇的积累还有很大提升的空间。

Recently there is a hot topic about computers and brains after the match between Google robot and human being, which catches so many people's attention on computers. As a concequence, some people begin to consider whether the computers will beat our brains. In my opinoins, no matter how much progress the computer technology has made, our brains are much more smart, computers are always tools that release the heavy load of our brains. Here are some reasons contributing to my opinion. First, the computers can't get the energy independently, which can keep the programs working. Without the electric energy, the machines are dead. Second, computers can update their software, just like human being can acquire new knowledge. The computers can't update their hardware by themself, however human beings can grow up, can make their body much stronger. Besides, human beings can cure themselves if the bodies are hurt, but the computers can do nothing if the hardware break. So, by compareing the most important parts of computers to human beings, it's obvious that human being has much advantages that can help human being survive in the nature , and as a tool invented by human being, the computer can't live alone. And at last, I think i need to say, even in the match, Google robot won the human being, we still must realize the winner was the Google company, not the robot, because, Google company controls the robot.