邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅。

As we know,campus violence become more and more serious.So as a stuents,how should we improve our safety? I have some view for you Firstly,in our campus,we should let security guard to keep our safety. Secondly,we should build a firendship with each other.you konw .It's very important for us .Thirdly we see somebody screw someone over .we must tell teacher in time try our best to stop them, don't panic If you are in campus violence All in all, as a students we must keep our safrty .