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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40891
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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若注意一些语法错误,文章会更漂亮;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;文中词汇表达较灵活丰富,不过请检查文章的单词拼写。

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It's not wise for us to make a conclusion immedeately by looking and hearing.This proverb is saying that whatever and whenever we do anything,we must look before you leap prudent. After looking this sentence,i make a deeply thought in my mind.It's a common phenomenon that poeple make conclusions roughly without thinking deeply,those who lead them do not get a satisfying result,even they have expended much time and care.I,as a college student,am convined that we should look before you leap prudent when we do anything.For example,my friend,is a worker at a small company,who has formed a bad habit that makes conclusions rashly by looking and hearing.As a result,she had made a big mistake at her work and lead the company lost big benifits.Finally,she had fired. By this example,it's high time that we must pay more attention to do anything by looking before you leap prudent.Only in this way,can we deal with things correctly and efficiently.

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