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It's not wise for us to make a decision immediately by looking and hearing. It is saying that whatever and whenever we do anything, we must look before you leap. After reading this sentence, I make a deeply thought in my mind. It's a common phenomenon that people make a decision roughly without thinking deeply, those who lead them cannot get a satisfying result, even they have expended much time and care. In my point of view, I, as a college student, am convinced that we should look before you leap when we do anything. Here is an example, my friend, is a worker at a small company, who has formed a bad habit that makes conclusions rashly by looking and hearing. As a result, she had made a big mistake at her work and the company lost big benefits. Finally, she had fired. By this example, it's high time that we must pay more attention to do anything by looking before you leap. Only in this way, can we handle things correctly and efficiently.
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