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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12893
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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文中词汇表达较恰当,高级词汇表达灵活;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;复杂句使用不错,句法规范。

用户练习作文:

What emerge into our sight is a simple and thought-provokeing cartoon that parents facing to a computer,they communicate with there child;he should be leave off his computer and get something to eat.Apparently,this drawing can be associated with the significance of the computer is overused.If people intend to achieve success and maintain a harmonious relationship with others,it is abvisable for them to control the computer or other equipment used. In present-day society,it is a common phenomenon for child to overuse computers or technology equipments.Meanwhile,individuals in mounting numbers deem it harmful for there famliy and also useless for there body.A good case in point is that the story in the drawing:

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