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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40795
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用高级词汇,语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;句法知识扎实,可适当增加长句的使用。

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Living in an age when the adolescents are lack of the necessary guidance and supervision, we can never fail to figure out the fact that teenagers are becoming especially self-conscious. Under this circumstance, the youngsters are more likely to believe in what they have listened or seen instead of thinking twice before drawing their conclusions, which is pathetically and undoubtedly considered controversial or even unreasonable. The reasons why I insist on the viewpoint that we should never directly and irresponsibly make a decision only by listening or seeing mainly lie in the following two aspects. To begin with, it is an invariable law to every existence in the world that nothing will stay still even for just one second. So are the things happening around us. What we see or listen may be just some particular periods of the development of things, which proves unstable and changeable. In addition, we make decisions just through seeing or listening are usually one-sided. Drawing conclusions rashly is not objective enough to make our statements persuasive. To sum up, it is unwise for us to define any thing as what we assume or imagine at first sight. Only by thinking seriously and analyzing accurately, can we come up with more rational and reasonable conclusions.

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