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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇表达灵活；文章衔接手法恰当；从句使用稍显不足，注意个别句子错误。
What emerge into our sight is a simple and thought-provokeing cartoon that parents facing to a computer,they communicate with there child;he should be leave off his computer and get something to eat.Apparently,this drawing can be associated with the significance of the computer overused.If people intend to achieve success and maintain a harmonious relationship with others,it is abvisable for them to control the computer or other equipment used. In present-day society,it is a common phenomenon for child to overuse computers or technology equipment.Meanwhile,individuals in mounting numbers deem it harmful for there famliy and also useless for there body.A good case in point is that the story in the drawing:the child use his computer a long time and he forget to eating,he ignores communicate with his parents,so his parents sent a messages by computer to him. It is overusing the technology equipment that enables person to lose there life and health.As a matter of fact, a increasing number of people have come to realize the nagetive impact of overuse computer or some others. As a college student, I am convinced it is nagetive impact of overuse computer and lose the people communication.What should we bear in mind that no communication,no life.
