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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4498
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分80.5分
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作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用学术词汇;作者句法知识掌握的错误,可适当增加从句的使用;全文结构较为严谨。

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As the contemporary society develops dramatically ,there has existed a phenomenonof how to live a low-carbon life that has arouse individuals great concern.If you went into a supermarket, you will see a plant of commercials which were branded by the label of low-carbon, such as green ,environment friendly, zero-release and so forth.A sea of account for this trend, yet I will review the most significant.   Low-carbon life is beneficial for our daily life, which is resource-saved, money-economized and advantageous for our fitness.All of this factors lead to the fact that the life style of low-carbon has became an indispensable part in our daily life, as time goes by it will show more profound significant, in the long term low-carbon life will facilitate to establish a graceful environment.   Ultimately ,just as a proverb saying:life is not merely living but living in healthy.so we have adequate reasons to believe that only when we live in a low-carbon, green way can we hope to enjoy a more comfortable and convenient life.

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