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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；建议适当增加些复杂句的使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Every coin has two sides. Putting all your eggs in one basket, likely, has both advantages and disadvantages. Yet, in my opinion, the disadvantages of putting your eggs in one basket far outweigh its advantages.Thus, it is never too careful to always have plan B when we cope with important events. Nobody can know what is going to happen in the future. When unexpected accidents happened, you would find yourself in a desperate situation, losing everything you have. Putting all you have that equals to put all the risks and pressures together. That’s why we need to think about all the possible risks and prepare extra plans ahead before we make decisions on important events. In other words, we must have different plans and preparations for fear of undesirable results. In conclusion, it is unadvisable to put all eggs in only one basket. That’s because this may give rise to unaffordable and unexpected consequences which might make you disappointed and annoyed. Therefore, I assert that we should have alternative choices to assure everything goes well.
