2005年12月24日英语四级作文真题:名校校园旅游

可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；句法知识不错，多多加强复杂句的练习；文章词汇表达多样性不足，不过词汇拼写要再接再厉。

Follow the world's development,culture serves as geting progress.And famous campus are becoming the new tour places.For this phenonment,different people hold different opinions. The University Campus should be oben to tourists is a problem.Some of people insist that university campus are possible quiet,and people should't break the amstphere,so they don't agree that .But other people disagree.They want to travel the university campus to learn something and feel some fantasty sence. For me,I agree with the first people--the university campus shouldn't be open to tourists.As we all know,campus are pure places and quiet. It's important for us to keep the amstphere.Also,they are so mystory for outside people.