文章衔接手法恰当;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误;采用了一些简单的从句。
My hometown is full of history, it locates in east of Shandong province. Daming lake provides a releasing place for people after haved dinner with their family. there is mountiain named Qianhe. When in the morining inhabitants often climbs up to view the whole scenery of the city. If you are interest of delicious food, this place is all right destination. The inhabitants are friendly, you can get information about the history and humanity on the city.