文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;文中如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇。
Recently, an article about the growing number of students of high schools and universities don't pay much attention on the study of chinese was published on a famous website, which hits a hot discussion in public. Enough attention should be given to the study of chinese ? Of course, we should do that. Chinese is our mother language, which conveys our traditional and modern culture. It's not hard to find that Chinese is so important that we cannot ignore it. But what make the phenomenon occoures? Why? Here are some reasons that can make sense. First, our school outweigh the imprtance of English, both the teachers and students would learn English not Chinese, just because they are told that if you want to get a high-wage work, you need to speak English clearly, and need to write English papers.