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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71640
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

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We can see from the picture, a father and his child. Having heard his son 's words, "Dad, I am a bit worried about disposing of nuclear was" and the father the replies, "If you can empty the refuse collection here, you can do anything". Apparently they were dialogue tells us a truth, that is the importance of small things. Quantitative change is the basis of the qualitative change, only to do the little things, big achievements possible. Xunzi said "short step, without that, beyond does not product streams into rivers". The fine things in life, do not ignore, perhaps inadvertently this tiny things can bring you to success. In short,, we need to pay attention to every small thing, not matter in a small and not for, so will the great career.

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