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In recent years,more and more people search the imformation by the Internet.Thanks to the fast development of the Internet that people can get the imformation in time.However,some people depend too much on the Internet.They believe all they saw and heard from the Internet.It is an unwise deside for them. The reason why we can not depend too much on what we saw and heard is that some of the imformations are publishing on some purpose.We can not infer the correction directly.From this way,we may cheat by some imformations.On the other hand,we can draw different conclusion from the same things even if we do not know the fact. what is more,people always trust their mind,even if they do not know the fact.Sometimes,it is uncritical sometimes,it deside ones life.So,we can not draw conclusion by what we saw and heard only,it is unwise.
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