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It aroused a lot of attention concerning the information exploring recently and there is a hot topic about it ,which means that a wealth of information creats a poverty of attention.Addimittely,a varity people have a thousand of ideas about it .I think we should judge it in oppsite way. undoubtly, the niformation age offer us a plenty of information whatever we need it or not.for instance,the advertisement brands beside the subway station always change,which can offer us the most uppest things for our daily life including cloths ,food,and other funny things.it is impossible to remind all of them by heart. But you will remember the things you need. so, it won't weak your attention.in fact,you just pay attention to the things that you want mostly,which make it possible that more information would creat the poverty of attention. Nothing would disturb you if you know what you want clearly.what's more , the informationg age provide us a lot of possible for our daily life and convienient our life style .however,the most important thing is that we know what we want and select the most helpful information.
