2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，高级词汇使用过少；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意文中的句子错误。

There is no doubt that everyone likes success,but how can we get success?from my opinion,there are there ways to success. firstly,you should have some special quality if you want to access to success.such as patience,kindness,hardly and so on. secondly,you should think what you want to get or how you should do.Good thoughts is the basic of the success,if you have any thoughts about your brain,you are away from success. lastly,you should action.you should get involved in your work.there is a saying goes:action is important than words. In a word,do your best and you are access your success.