采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;若注意一些语法错误,文章会更漂亮;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。
As a adults, it is very important for us to think carefully before we get resolutions.Whatever you see or heard, it is very foolish to have a result immeditally. There may be some mistakes or prejuduces before we have an end. For example, when i was a little girl,I heard a friend said some bad words about me. I was so angry that I did not connect with her at all. After ten years I know the whole words what she said, I know that she was good heart for me to want to help me recify my errors.But I was so angry and unwise at that time to communicate with her about that, then I lost a friend who is really good to me.There are so many cases about the mistakens of unwise results what we get immediately after we have seen or heard. So in my view, I obsulutlly agreement with the idea that it is unwise to get an conclusion immediatelly after what we see and hear.
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