小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My good friend is Hu Ya Ting .she is a good gilr. She love all of the subjets. Besides she's a monitor of my ciass and she get on well with classmate.She is very like English.She is very tall and thin.Sometimes,she is go to the park with me.This is my good friend.