单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累;从句数量不足。
My holiday is very long. Because is summer vacation. In July,I'm go for a travel with my family.I'm so happy. In August I'm go to my aunt's home.It's very happy.aunt's little baby is very cute.In August 12th,is my birthday.we well go to the park and eat birthday cake.The little baby is happy too.