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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40881
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;若注意一些句子错误,文章会更漂亮;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

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Make a deep thinking before reach the final conclusion. Nowdays with the rapid and advanced tech, various of things are presented. It means one thing may own amount kinds of types which lead us confusing. In this way, it is unwise to make a conclusion only by what you hear and what you seen. The deep thinking is play a significant role in our diary life. You'll get confused if you don’t look deep on things. For instance, as we all have pasted the national higher education examination, the paper are full of misleading especially in science and mathematics. If someone don't look around before go ahead, he/she may not get a higher score than that with deep thinking. In conclude, the information are like the sword which have double sides, that is to say the information have the useful and valuable parts. Only we take out of the unvariable information and also together with deep thinking we will handling things better.

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