2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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I'm happy to hear that you will go to visit my hometown in china ,my hometown is in zhuhai guangdong,which is a ocean city . Zhuhai ,which is my hometown and i think it's very interesting .For one thing,zhuhai has fresh air ,suitable enviroment ,was admitted the most suit for living city in china ,for another thing ,zhuhai with many famous spots like the zhuhai park ,zhuhai fish lady andyuan ming xinyuan . All in all,i think zhuhai is the most interesting place ,if you come here you will like this city too.finally ,welcome you come to china as soon as possbile .