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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40870
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;拼写做的很棒,高级词汇可适量增加;作者句法知识较为扎实,可增加复合句和从句使用。

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It is seldom sensible to set about doing something , when you hear or see them instantly. The purpose of my opinion is to show us that utmost importance should be attached to take action seriously . To begin with ,an attitude of caution could be said to be the watchword,or motto of coping with something hard. Think of all the necessary times a consideration must be carried out before a true decision is made. In addition, reckless is also responsible for many of historical celebrity’s failure . To demonstrate , that Zhu Youjian kill Yuan Chonghuan incorrectly accelerates ming dynasty’s destroy. Therefore,in order to acquire success, we should have a cautious attitude firstly. To sum up ,in any field of endeavor,it seems necessary to first put great emphasis on cautious before one do some decision. It is as if life is testing us ,testing our attitude of taking actions to see if we are really dedicated to our vision,before life finally rewards us with success.

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