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In this world of change and complexity,the need for information is the greatest importance.Those people who have accurate ,reliable,up to date information to solve the day to day problems,the critical problems of their businsess,social and family problems,will survive and suceeded."Knowlege is power" may well be the trust worthy and acess to information may be the most critical requirement of all people. At the same time, a wealth of information creats a poverty of attention. Simple as it is,what the phnomenon conveys to us is thought provoking.People in mountain numbers are beginning to think that mass of information lead directly to poverty of attention.First of all,it is well-kown that we exist in a dymanic world with many informations.We should cultivate our abilities to distinguish good information from bad.Secondly,assuming a accurate goal,we will find the informations do not distupt our metality. Hence,it is impertative for us to take some measures to help us in daily life.We sould bear in mind goal is the first to take steps.Only by taking concrete and practical steps one after another can we finanlly reach our commom cherished goal in this ever rapidy changing life.