采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文中较丰富地使用高级词汇,但单词拼写错误较多。
In this world of change and complexity,the need for information is the greatest importance.Those people who have accurate ,reliable,up to date information to solve the day to day problems,the critical problems of their business,social and family problems,will survive and suceeded."Knowledge is power" may well be the trust saying and access to information may be the most critical requirement of all people. At the same time, a wealth of information creats a poverty of attention. Simple as it is,what the phenomenon conveys to us is thought provoking.People in mountain numbers are beginning to think that mass of information lead directly to poverty of attention.First of all,it is well-kown that we exist in a dynamic world with many information.We should cultivate our abilities to distinguish good information.Secondly,assuming to have a accurate goal,we will find the information do not distupt our metality. Hence,it is imperative for us to take some measures in daily life.We sould bear in mind the goal is the first to take steps.Only by taking concrete and practical steps one after another can we finally reach our common cherished goal in this ever rapidly changing life.