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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):信息爆炸

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:09浏览次数:5742
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
用户的作文(系统评分76.0分
评语:

采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文中较丰富地使用高级词汇,但单词拼写错误较多。

用户练习作文:

In this world of change and complexity,the need for information is the greatest importance.Those people who have accurate ,reliable,up to date information to solve the day to day problems,the critical problems of their business,social and family problems,will survive and suceeded."Knowledge is power" may well be the trust saying and access to information may be the most critical requirement of all people. At the same time, a wealth of information creats a poverty of attention. Simple as it is,what the phenomenon conveys to us is thought provoking.People in mountain numbers are beginning to think that mass of information lead directly to poverty of attention.First of all,it is well-kown that we exist in a dynamic world with many information.We should cultivate our abilities to distinguish good information.Secondly,assuming to have a accurate goal,we will find the information do not distupt our metality. Hence,it is imperative for us to take some measures in daily life.We sould bear in mind the goal is the first to take steps.Only by taking concrete and practical steps one after another can we finally reach our common cherished goal in this ever rapidly changing life.

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