Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;丰富从句的使用,文章会更出色;高级词汇比较灵活,但文中拼写错误稍多。
Firstly, communication on the interest makes confience for people, for example, people works or study in different city or areas can contact evch time as they like and in time. but this method wouldn't replace face-to-face contact. If our friends, relatives or parents live with us or the residences are adjoined, we should meet face-to-face, this way we can enjoy the true feeling of care between us. we should be able to take a appropriate way to communicate wity someone which we are fond of to increase the relations among us. If the distance is juest between updstairs and downstairs, we communicate by network, the care is gradully reducted, and strangness will be increased. In short, communitcation in network should be help us keep the close relations or even promoted.