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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；作者能较丰富地使用高级词汇，但词汇量不大，且存在拼写错误。
Firstly, communication by network makes convenience for people, for example, person work or study in different cities or areas can contact each time as they like and in time. but this method wouldn't replace face-to-face contact. If our friends, relatives or parents live with us or the residences adjoined, we should meet face-to-face, this way we can enjoy the true feeling of care between us. we should be able to take a appropriate way to communicate with someone which we are fond of to increase the relations among us. If the distance is just between upstairs and downstairs, we communicate by network, the care is gradully reducted, and strangeness will be increased. In short, communitcation in network should help us keep the close relations or even promoted.
