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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12881
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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评语:

作者在句法层面做的很棒;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;文中词汇表达用的较灵活,同时能够较恰当地使用高级词汇。

用户练习作文:

Firstly, communication by network convenient people's life, for example, person work or study in different cities or areas can contact each time as they like and in time. But this method wouldn't replace face-to-face contact. If our friends, relatives or parents live with us or the residences adjoined, we should meet face-to-face, this way we can enjoy the true feeling between us. We should be able to take an appropriate way to communicate with someone that we are fond of to increase the relations among us. If the distance is just between upstairs and downstairs, we communicate by network, the concern is gradually reduced, and strangeness will be increased. In short, conmunication in network should help us keep the close relations or even promoted.

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