作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加从句的使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
A teacher asks a student the result of two plus two, the student reply that he needs tech support. It gives birth to a hot discussion upon whether technology is indispensable in education. From my perspective, i strongly hold the opinion that our education can't be without technology. In the Information Age, for the reason that no matter where you are, technology lives with us, namely, we live on technology now. Were we unable to master the knowledge of technology or we can't get use of it smoothly, we are bound to survive in the society hard. Hence, not only should our education is in need of using technology as a tool, but also teaches our kids how to operate on technology. Unavoidably, it occurs that some students rely on technology excessively, thus losing the awareness and ability to study on his own gradually. Confronted with that, we ought to guide them back in the right way of using technology instead of keeping technology away from education. I do believe that putting technology in the proper position must be of great benefit for our education!
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