题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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Now,here is a qustion,what do you think about maining trust.Different person has different thoughts concerning the word,trust.However,some may just connect it with the person's relationship,some can be remind of the confidence and so on. I will talk about it in a simple way because of the limited time and space. As far as i concerned,trust means both the people's relationship and the attitude to the things.And here are sveral reasons for it.First and foremost,we should have confidence on everything what we do,including have a goog relationshio with our friends and the result of things we are doing now.Secondly,we would have a great attitude toward to every stuff we are going throng now.Addimitidely,once we had no turst on our friends and the things we are doing now,we would never pay all our attention on our behavir.Last but not the least,although we have an adjustment on our plan,that doesn't mean that we lose trust on the stuff.we just make things better and have better trust. In conclusion,we should have a strong confidence on everything,and make our life better.